Onomatopoeia Nice/angry monster!

In literacy we are learning how to use onimatipaya and this is a story with onimatipaya.


Nice/angry monster!

One cold windy day this boy lived with his lazy smelly parents, every day the boy had to cook dinner for his lazy parents the boy did not like cooking dinner but the boy had to He thought that it would be a good idea to go to the beach and catch some fish some  so that afternoon the boy goot some marshmallows and a fishing rod and then he walked to the beach to catch some fish.

Finally the boy was at the beach  

The boy spent about one hour or two trying to catch something but it was getting dark so the boy got a stick and started cooking some marshmallows, suddenly the boy heard something in the water splash!!!!! Went the water as something crept up behind the boy. Ahhh” said the boy  ran and tried to defend himself with the marshmallow stick the boy had a marshmallow on the stick and monster grabbed the marshmallow and throw it in his mouth chomp chomp!!! said the monster. The monster was doing a lot of crazy things like doing flips jumping every wear.The  boy got a marshmallow out of the bag to and gave it to the monster yummy growled the monster

After the monster ate the marshmallow the boy suddenly fell over and the monster stood over him then the monsters eyes changed! They were now scary  and the  boy ran off to the forest  the monster stomped and stomped until the boy stop running then he threw the pillow at the monster and the monster put it on a stick and tried to cook it. The pillow disappeared and then there was no sign of the boy.

I like writing this because it didn't take to long and it was quiet easy

I hope you enjoyed my storey