Date 27.10.16
There was a boy, the Boy's name was Bryce. He had a friend Named Dilain. Dilian stayed the night at Bryce’s house. That night they both went to bed early for their massive journey in the morning. When they woke up in the morning they got up and had breakfast when they finished their breakfast they asked Bryce’s Mum if they were allowed to go for a journey on the mountain, Bryce’s Mum said yes, both of the boys ran of to their room to get ready to go to the mountain. As soon as they had all of their gear on they were off to climb the mountain. When they got to the mountain Dilian said “should we go back I’m already tired” but Bryce said “no lets keep going”.
They were going so well they went higher.
Suddenly there was a rock that wasn't stable Dilian stood on the rock and rolled down the mountain until he reached onto a sharp and hard rock.
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